Thursday 8 August 2019

Speech




This is my speech and it took me 3 minutes to read it. It is about how the government should provid money for shools to have a pool for the students to swim in.

By
Labels: , ,

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 November 2019 at 11:31

    Kia Ora Millie! I'm Jade from Te Hapara school. I loved the way how your speech had lots of detail and descriptive words. I also liked the way you hooked me into you awesome speech! Great Job!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous6 November 2019 at 11:33

    Hi millie
    im Jystal i'm a year 5 nearly a year 6 im go to te hapara school i love your slideshow about you and i love the photos i like the way you showed photos and information about what you like and all this other stuff i really like the you done different colors for each page anyway nice looking at your cool and colorful slideshow

    ReplyDelete
  3. Unknown11 November 2019 at 10:15

    Bonjour Millie,
    I agree if people dont learn to swin in their school pool they could drown! I love the descriptive language!
    Nice work.
    -Maddie

    ReplyDelete
  4. Unknown12 November 2019 at 09:46

    Hi millie,I agree new zealand is really nice but always hasn't been nice and beautiful,everything has its flaws or ups and downs.

    Jay

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)